Friday, August 29, 2008

My Bridget Had A Rare Smile Comments

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It all began structurally,
The beautiful bricks in her eyes,
Began the soothing effect of the foundation,
Knocking down houses of soary wrinkles,
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OLUMIDE AYODELE
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Sumita Datta 05 September 2008

Well expressed.... :)

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Tolulope Akinwole 05 September 2008

if this isn't poetic, i wonder what is!

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Chitra - 29 August 2008

a good one, your expressions are so novel

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Sandra Fowler 29 August 2008

Very charming. You have a way with words. Kind regards, Sandra

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Marvin Brato 29 August 2008

Smile is the window of the soul, indeed it s captivating and passionate poem! A 10.

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