My Bride To Be Comments

Thanks James the dance is still on

Go ahead and put the ring on her finger. You are just about to start a new life. God be on your side.

This is twosome bro...starting written poetry and starting with it crowning a newly found soulmate. I wish you blessings in both.

Hmmm and I wish you a happy life ever after with your wife to be...Great work brother, I love the genuineness created in your poem.

I like, i like -this is an awesome first James. I look forward to reading and cheering you till you 'slip' the ring. A 10 from me.

This is a good piece James, she must be a lovely one.