Wednesday, December 17, 2014

My Brethren Comments

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Look at her lunar sprance
With her, her jewels dance
Unto the end of day
And the dawn of night
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Aaryan Irani
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Madathil Rajendran Nair 01 March 2015

You are awesome Aaryan. What a style of writing. The concluding lines are just fantastic. (10)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 December 2014

My Brethren a nice poem with the words and imagery- To her beauty; you eyes and soul shall You lend, The moon, My brethren. so beautiful 10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 December 2014

My Brethren a nice poem with the words and imagery- To her beauty; you eyes and soul shall You lend, The moon, My brethren. so beautiful 10

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