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With intrigues of the title, i came here to read, and the read was worth to have as it a mixture of pure feeling, poetic and sincerity which place the poem in a best place, so heartfelt...keep writing, it was a good write! _Soul

tank sir for all this word I find them very interesting I hope for you good luck for every think and I am looking for your words.....

nostalgic thoughts moving one

love still exists by the remniscence as one browses the rack of memories of lost love, ............. a superb imagery of love, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

Again, great diction. What a way to express how you feel! Im looking forward to reading more from u: -)

I have opened the doors I shut /...Remember my heart once our flame No longer love, mere ashes of shame / And now that the wind of change came It took all and my youth the same...... These lines are all engulfing! ! ! I've enjoyed the read.

I have opened the doors I shut /...Remember my heart once our flame No longer love, mere ashes of shame / And now that the wind of change came It took all and my youth the same...... These lines are all engulfing! ! ! I've enjoyed the read.

Remember my heart once our flame No longer love, mere ashes of shame..........wonderful imagery of love when befuddled by the reeks of time, i do enjoy,10/10, thanks for sharing

A very well written poem, lovely words, I enjoyed reading this, thanks Lynda x

i enjoyed reading this poem, it flows well and i found the way you use words interesting ie' I saw on my book such a heavy dust' and 'remember my heart once our flame No longer love, mere ashes of shame '. I will be reading this piece again! well done, Boukhalfa. jane s