It is falling apart
I am not
It is decaying
I am perpetual
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With Gods help we can survive, beautiful and powerful write! !
great expression.. body and soul are both HIS gifts to use them in the right way.. blessings..!
truely beautiful, i just luvd the way you put your thoughts in such words.. Beautifuly written. Keep sharing..
Superb! Your road always, ends before God. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for the kind invite to read your write.The differentiation between the body and soul is superbly brought out.So profound thoughts from so young a person is really surprising.Well done. An enjoyable poem With best wishes Chandra Thiagarajan.