Tuesday, November 6, 2012

My Body Comments

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It is falling apart
I am not
It is decaying
I am perpetual
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JR Cuyam
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Chandra Thiagarajan 09 November 2012

Thanks for the kind invite to read your write.The differentiation between the body and soul is superbly brought out.So profound thoughts from so young a person is really surprising.Well done. An enjoyable poem With best wishes Chandra Thiagarajan.

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Hazel Durham 09 November 2012

With Gods help we can survive, beautiful and powerful write! !

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Anita Sehgal 09 November 2012

great expression.. body and soul are both HIS gifts to use them in the right way.. blessings..!

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Sahil Sood 08 November 2012

truely beautiful, i just luvd the way you put your thoughts in such words.. Beautifuly written. Keep sharing..

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Neela Nath Das 08 November 2012

Superb! Your road always, ends before God. Thanks for sharing.

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