Thursday, February 5, 2009

My Blue Valentine Comments

Rating: 5.0

A happy Valentines day,
Isn't it supposed to be?
A moment to celebrate,
A date sublime as fate.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Alison Cassidy 13 February 2009

Marvin, this pensive little poem beautifully expresses the disappointment of jilted love. Your title is perfect. Your poem truly saddens. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

beautiful and poignant poem written in nice rhyming...10+

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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