Tuesday, July 8, 2008

My Blue Heaven Comments

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I want to stay
In my blue
Heaven
All by myself
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Aldo Kraas
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Sandra Dodd 03 February 2010

I am thinking that the 'blue heaven' is a special place. I often feel this way about my home. So nice there, why go anywhere not just as nice and safe. When the poet meets the reader with relatability they have connected the page with maning. You have captured great feeling with your writing of this peice. Wonderful and you should be proud.

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