My blue butterfly has lost its way
It fluttered and flew when trees swayed
Now no more are found around my garden
My blue butterfly's heart has hardened
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Now my cherry blossom is pale! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I feel the sadness here, Rini, the poignant sense of loss and aloneness. Very powerful use of imagery to connect to emotion. Excellent writing, my friend. (and I wish you butterflies) :)
A beautifully crafted imaginative write that captures a lost love. Amazing piece..10
A great metaphor, a sad story of two lovers who have been lost the charms of love like a flower and a butterfly. A lovely poem.
A beautiful image of natural beauty, Shibu. Thank you very much for sharing it.
The depiction of garden along with the blue butterfly has been touchingly done. Beautiful poem dear Rini, thanks for sharing.
So goes the world. Nothing is perennial. Seekers of honey seldom do love the flower of their need. Beautiful poem with amazing romance. Thanks Rini for such a wonderful poem. 10
So goes the world. Nothing is perennial. Seekers of honey seldom do love the flower of their need. Beautiful poem with amazing romance. Thanks Rini for such a wonderful poem. 10
Beautiful imaginative write Rini. Butterflies do not stay in one place.10 Nuder
This is absolutely a brilliant poem! ! Now my cherry blossom is is pale...this is my favorite of all you have written! A really great poem!
Great work.....like it.