Saturday, March 3, 2018

My Blue Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

My blue butterfly has lost its way
It fluttered and flew when trees swayed
Now no more are found around my garden
My blue butterfly's heart has hardened
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Rini Shibu
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Anjandev Roy 14 January 2021

Great work.....like it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2018

Now my cherry blossom is pale! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 12 March 2018

thanks Edward Kofi Louis..! !

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Seamus O Brian 07 March 2018

I feel the sadness here, Rini, the poignant sense of loss and aloneness. Very powerful use of imagery to connect to emotion. Excellent writing, my friend. (and I wish you butterflies) :)

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Seamus for reading and posting you remarks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 March 2018

A beautifully crafted imaginative write that captures a lost love. Amazing piece..10

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Rose marie for your lovely words

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Akhtar Jawad 05 March 2018

A great metaphor, a sad story of two lovers who have been lost the charms of love like a flower and a butterfly. A lovely poem.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Akhtarji for your great comment..! !

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 March 2018

A beautiful image of natural beauty, Shibu. Thank you very much for sharing it.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Jazib Kamalvi...! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2018

The depiction of garden along with the blue butterfly has been touchingly done. Beautiful poem dear Rini, thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thank you so much Kumarji..! ! Rini

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Lamar Cole 04 March 2018

Great poem about my blue butterfly.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Lamar for reading and posting comment..! !

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 March 2018

So goes the world. Nothing is perennial. Seekers of honey seldom do love the flower of their need. Beautiful poem with amazing romance. Thanks Rini for such a wonderful poem. 10

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Subhas, well said

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 March 2018

So goes the world. Nothing is perennial. Seekers of honey seldom do love the flower of their need. Beautiful poem with amazing romance. Thanks Rini for such a wonderful poem. 10

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Nudershada Cabanes 03 March 2018

Beautiful imaginative write Rini. Butterflies do not stay in one place.10 Nuder

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

thanks Nuder..! ! ! ! Rini

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Bill Cantrell 03 March 2018

This is absolutely a brilliant poem! ! Now my cherry blossom is is pale...this is my favorite of all you have written! A really great poem!

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Bill for visiting this poem..! ! RIni

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Kostas Lagos 03 March 2018

Exceptional as always!

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks Kostas Lagos..! ! Rini

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