Wednesday, November 11, 2009

My Bittersweet Lullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your my bittersweet lullaby
you changed my life
not caring about my pain and shame
no it was only for your gain..
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Jenna Marie
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Neil Singleton 22 November 2009

wow i think you are really talent.. you shoud publish this i am very fond on it.. so emotion and so true words comeing from your heart i ill vote on this and give you a high rateing on 10.. keep up the sweet loveing work, .. best reguards neil xx

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Wow, I really like this poem. I can tell you put so much emotion into it. I hate whoever made you feel like this. That really stinks

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