Thursday, October 30, 2014

My Birthday Gift Comments

Rating: 5.0

A glory was born unto the world
Some two decades back:
Caressed by the mother's smiles
Dipped in the father's heartfelt joys
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Rajnish Manga 27 January 2019

....smile while you can For there is so much to be done Before a tear is shed… The poem is all about being positive even in the face of adversity. These outpourings of a loving and caring heart can be helpful to one and all. It goes into MyPoemList. Thanks you so much for sharing this Exquisitely crafted Birthday Gift courtesy Shri Rameshwer Singh ji.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 01 February 2019

Thanks for this lovely comment, RajnishJi, on this poem which reminds me of the lovely days gone by, never to return...

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 08 November 2014

A beautiful poem and nice presentation of feeling in such purity of heart and love. I likes it very much.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 01 February 2019

Thanks for your kind appreciation, Gangadharan!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 08 November 2014

For there is so much be done.....beautifully presented poem. Nice job done with mother's smile. Nature is mother. Beautiful one.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 01 February 2019

Thanks for your kind appreciation, Bhargabi!

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