Friday, November 7, 2014

My Birth Comments

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A petty sinful soul was standing before,
The Lord of Justice responding with ignore,
Long ago he had applied for freedom from desires,
Lust of body that his body acquires,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Ramesh Rai 10 November 2014

8th feb.on the day of Nirvana you landed on this day especially at the place where Lord Buddha got his eternal abode, certainly it is the reason your ink is enlightening the world. Wish for many return of this day in your life.Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.

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Khalida Bano Ali 09 November 2014

A desire of being good and doing good.

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Valsa George 09 November 2014

It is great that your birth coincides with the Buddhist festival and that you eagerly await to add worth to your life! A beautiful poem where a devout soul is looking forward to getting liberated from the annihilating desires of life like Shri Buddha! Great write!

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Salini Nair 08 November 2014

wonderful presentation of birth in this beautiful poem...great work

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Saheb Mohapatra 07 November 2014

YES, birth is the most pious day of one's life......................carrying emotions........godliness........and many fascinating things...........great poem..................................................................................................................THANKS

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