My Biggest Mistake Comments

there's time for e'erything/ a good-poem!

ahead of you shining days are more than you ever imagine. Really thoughtful of you. Keep it coming. Well done

very well written, emotional, i feel the loss

really really I love this sonnet so much, and I love your purifying heart and your style.thank you for inviting me to read your sparkling poems.

no worry..sometimes mistakes happen..narrated well

Nicely done. Large history in a small poem. Samantha