You are the only one I know
The one whom I am expecting to take a bow
My prayer God not to damn you
But for your best, clearance of your sins too
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Lovely piece! You expressed your feelings beautifully. Nice doing.
A poetess of pure heart you are Luwi....Your emotion can be felt through-out...the reflection of a hearts love not returned...yet I feel your strength in your expression...it's a lovely and tenderly spoken piece my lovely...well penned 10++
You've given life back to Lues.What a marvellous feat Luwi.
seems as if you loved deeply...but the love was not returned...nevertheless, we know that our love's pure when we let it go for the sake of another's happiness... nice write!
A desperate wishing of an open heart of love and hate....well said10
You express wisdom of this life in your poem, Luwi..Very sincere and well-crafted..Thanks for sharing and keep on. Best wishes. Amary.
Your words here emitting pure love that in your beautiful mind! very touchy! God bless you 10+
Your writing well expressed have shown that the best way to face disappointment is to leave it behind and move on to face a brighter and more promising. He may have disappointed you, despite that you have forgiven him and wished him well that is what God expect all of us to do to forgive and bless those who have hurt us. By doing so with enough strength in us, God will show his mercy upon us.
Farwell since your entire life The best in your future is my wish God bless you with his endless care we have Let He give you peace and precious love what a sincere desire onpart of a real friend for friend.. i m greatly moved by the words of poetess... congrats for bold presentation...10 read mine prayer....humble submission
best wishes to you, my friend... from my deepest heart.