Thursday, August 14, 2008

My Best Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is there with a cheery smile
when i am glad
My thoughts, my feelings
how easily she understand
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Jazib Kamalvi 04 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Shabana s. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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p.a. noushad 27 December 2008

beautiful nerration, good poem

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, aryaindia 19 August 2008

An endearing poem of how one feels about another. Very pleasant and appealing. Just ensure that the entire poem is in the same tense.

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Evelyn Gonzalez 14 August 2008

I Liked It But It Makes Me Want To Cry Becouse I Have A Best Friend And She's Replacing Me

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