Monday, April 2, 2018

My Beloved Woman Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember once
when we first met and fell in love
It was just you and I, like a old journeys
That journey was the only thing I believed
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Miguel Longuenda
COMMENTS
Jazib Kamalvi 13 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Michael B. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Carl Roussell 13 April 2018

I really like the last line, the only star I can behold, This says it all. Nice writing.

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Chinedu Dike 13 April 2018

Beautiful love poem, a smooth flow for joy. Very deep and passionate write that resonates with the soul. Thanks for sharing.

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Naila Rais 02 April 2018

A lovely poem...Many more will flow... Keep it up.... I would like you read my poems too and express your views... Naila 👍👍

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