Thursday, July 26, 2018

My Beloved Wife, ‘ A ' ….[ My Super-Serious Challenge-Write; & It Must Rhyme! ; Not Short; Definitions Supplied]] Comments

Rating: 5.0

'WHY' …she asks, 'do we together now live? '
[[ My wife is/(was?) thinking of ‘leaving me'; IT is TRUE! ]]
To this, her question, what answer shall I now give?
It must be honest and believable ….when I am through.
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Belle Wassermeister 17 November 2024

So she still hasn't left you? You must be doing something right!

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Bri Edwards 12 November 2024

Well, I started to read the poem and found my answer about 'A' in my title. : )) 'A' is the first letter of my wife's first name! ! ! BINGO!

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Bri Edwards 12 November 2024

I DON'T know WHY the title has the 'A' in it. ? ? ? ?

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Bri Edwards 25 February 2023

READERS: Thanks to all of you, especially to those who've left comments. AMAZINGLY I am still married to this wife! ! ! ;) But it 'ain't' always easy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 February 2023

Reading this poem again. As i commented earlier, it is an outright honest poem, to remain together for the rest of your lives. Best wishes to you both. I have already voted for this poem.

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Belle Wassermeister 11 July 2021

Glad to see that you too are still together!

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Bri Edwards 25 February 2023

'too' or 'two' or 'two too'? ? ? ;)

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Valentin Savin 26 December 2020

Dear Bri, thanks God I've managed to find you and your poems. This one I liked anв commented. I wonder if we are able to correspond as before within this renewed PH?

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Valentin Savin 11 September 2018

Dear Bri, That’s it. I agree with you and think that: Caesar’s Wife Must Be Above Suspicion...

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Bri Edwards 25 February 2023

My friend Val, I miss you since you disappeared from PH. : (

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Rajib Baskey 27 August 2018

Pleased to read this poem sir.....Really nice

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Valentin Savin 27 August 2018

Best of luck to you both. Your wife must be proud of you. God bless you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2018

We live together because we made a commitment & … …. despite ‘ups-and-downs', I'm your husband by choice. .................. ................. I still love you and plan to, Dear, for the rest of my life. I wish to share the good and bad.You ARE my ‘A' wife! ........so touching and impressive. It is really a beautiful poem on couple life nicely executed and a great tribute to your wife. Thanks for sharing. Full vote.

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Denis Mair 13 August 2018

His rhyming prowess and marital commitment having been put to the test, our poetically-and-connubially-challenged versifier rose to meet the occasion with gumption and grace.

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Simone Inez Harriman 12 August 2018

Now this must have brought tears to your lovely wife's eyes. I've always believed to see the best in my partner and that has always outweighed the negatives because I know if I chose to see the worst in him it would surely be the demise of our relationship. Enjoying each others company and doing things together is a good recipe for a successful relationship. I enjoyed your lovelyt poem Bri.10+

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Bharati Nayak 12 August 2018

Enjoyed reading- - - A lovely write where words are rhyming- - -I think rhyme comes to you without efforts because of practice.And when your heart is truly filled with love for your wife, I hope, your life must be beautiful. Wish you all the best Bri Edwards.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2018

An excellent effort to please a nagging wife! 'I still love you and plan to, Dear, for the rest of my life' - So, now one can 'plan' to 'love' his dear wife for the rest of one's life!

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Bri Edwards 06 August 2018

ok, still together and (usually) peaceful after she made a suggestion; i accepted her 3rd or 4th. but each day is a challenge, just like this poem was. , all poems AND wives are 'challenges', and i may never master either 'one'! ! bri :) aka 'challenged poet-husband'

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Valsa George 31 July 2018

I so much enjoyed this poem.... This is quite unlike most of your other poems where you deliberately sound silly! But this I think has come from your heart! Did you read it out to her? ? I am sure she is mighty pleased! No other engagements should stand in the way of marital companionship though each one has his/her own pursuits! Always find some time to be with one's mate! It will cement all cracks in marriage! Top marks!

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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2018

'This is quite unlike most of your other poems where you deliberately sound silly! ' - Ha ha ha! An interesting observation, Valsa!

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Bri Edwards 25 February 2023

I DON'T KNOW IF I READ IT TO HER. SHE'S NOT MUCH INTERESTED IN MY POEMS....or other thin\gs about me actually. And she can be a pain-in-my-. ha ha.

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Bri, this is such a fine poem devoted to your wife. She must be so proud of you. You have a unique style of expressing yourself with honesty. That's what i like in your poems. The last verse is wonderful. As always a full vote for you, dear Bri.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2018

A beautiful poem for your wife. Very lovingly penned. Stanza 4 and 6 and the 2 closure lines are very heartwarming. Your wife must frame this beautiful poem for her perusal. Very well crafted write.10++++++

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Ruta Mohapatra 27 July 2018

Enjoyed your poem! The line 'and, though it may be tiny, YOU ‘own' 99% of my heart'........is the best.

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