In a paradise underneath the sky,
The atmosphere seemingly appears calm;
But there is more to it than meets the eye
On the tiny island I call Guam.
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A nice flowing poem easy to read expresses your fondness for the Island of Gaum. Although the Islands physical distance is far away, its land is close to your heart. This was an enjoyable read.10/10.
This is also a lovely tribute. Though many people, like me, have heard of Guam, we have not had any actual experience of it. Personally, I would enjoy reading even more description about it. Perhaps this, too, could be lengthened?
Well written as crafted. This poem makes me to one day visit this far off land of trees palmed in the breeze. God bless us all-MJG.