My Beloved Father Comments

'Gone too Soon.' I'm at a loss for words. Such a great love between father and son. How precious: I felt every word of this poem. And am sorry that he had to go away. My deepest condolences to you.

This is one of the most beautiful tributes I have ever read to a father, sometimes when in life they steer us with a firm hand we object. However when we look back, they always did it with a golden heart. Superb. A ten.

I can feel the struggle here to move on, minus such a loving presence. But someone told me something beautiful the other day; that our loved ones are still inside us in a sense and if we try we can feel their hallowed presence and a sort of peace. So I intend to try that the next time I feel sorrowful. But this is a lovely tribute to a father's love. (and I can tell that you had a most amazing father)

The words in this poem are so beautiful, they tell the story of the great love you shared with your father. It brought tears to eyes, great poem Mohd.10+

I was really affected by your poignant and sensational poem...I felt that your heart and emotions are writing the lines not your hand...I really salute you for this brilliant work! May our fathers rest in peace... Merna

Great eulogy on Father …We know that that fathers are the external affair side while Mom is in Internal affairs in this caser your father managed both external n’ internal affairs …indeed ideal father be proud n’ contemplate on his teachings…great poem…. sharing Hon’ble Poet Mohammad-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

I love this piece, it is such a lovely tribute to your father and what he embodied, as well as in a sense a reflection of loving fathers, like my loving father, too precious. And all because they love us. That is what makes them so wonderful....they love us, irreplaceably. This is such a true piece. I love it. And my heart aches with it too, thankful for the precious moments yet with my daddy.

A heart warming piece of a great character who's name is Father! Very touching.

IT MADE ME TEARY EYES & THAT'S UNUSUAL FOR ME LOSING SOMEONE IS VERY PAINFUL & ESPECIALLY SOMEONE SO CLOSE READING THIS JUST MAKE ME THINK OF UNCONDITIONAL LOVE! ! ! ! *

A loving, warm and tender poem, in relation to your father! I too, have had the loss, many years ago, but he always remains with me, every single day. I invite you, to read my poem, called 'My Father', page 30-poem 588. I'm sure you'll see, we both, had very strong ties! Thanks, for the invite and thanks again, for your critique, on my poem, 'A Better Life'.

Really heart touching poem. It is an emotional and spontenous thought that has been composed in state of rapture. It seems that words themselves come out and set in a beautiful order. I like it very much.

It touched my heart...very good.