Tuesday, July 4, 2017

My Beloved Comments

Rating: 4.9

My deaf and dumb and blind beloved,
neither listens to me,
nor speaks to me,
nor looks at me,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 May 2018

I am for you and for me are you I am the same man in tact who makes fantasies a fact! Let the day of love come my love will enter her heart she will get all senses from me and I shall become deaf and dumb and blind...WHAT A LOVELY EXCHANGE BLESS YOU

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Nosheen Irfan 05 July 2017

Simply wowwww. Your poetic prowess at its best. Beautifully written. Great flow n rhythm. A huge 10.

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Loke Kok Yee 05 July 2017

Only those who love nature can communicate with her, certainly you do and the result is this beautiful poem! Thank you sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

Although beloved one does not able to speak, hear or tell or listens, still she feels love and affection. Nature is real to feel and nature has this power. Sometimes so far and sometimes so close, this nature gives amazing effect on mind. There is love always. Love makes fantastic act. Wonderfully and nicely crafted poem is shared here...10

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