Tuesday, June 14, 2011

My Beloved Comments

Rating: 5.0

My beloved is mine and I am hers
She who is finer than imagination
She has ravished my heart with her eyes
Her eyes, like doves by the rivers of waters
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Achilles Mauko
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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

a beautiful write about your beloved. very sweet and touching

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Ray Carpenter 23 August 2011

Your creativity and imagery impress me.I love this poem.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 June 2011

Full of tender feelings. Incredibly well. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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without a name Face 14 June 2011

Beautifully writen, I have to say i'm a bit Jealous of whoever that was for.....

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Tai Chi Italy 14 June 2011

There is a lot of love surrounding this site tonight. Your poem expresses it in the most beautifully earlier century romantic style, with great skill and affection. A most admirable poem to honor such a love as you bestow upon one lucky person. I like your name. Love suits it well. Smiling at you Tai

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