Tuesday, June 24, 2014

My Being Comments

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Empty and desolate
my soul is barren
in time I will just
get worse
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Emily Boschulte
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Bri Edwards 24 June 2014

unlike Colleen, below, i did not sense that the speaker necessarily has been in a 'relationship' yet. i wonder. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 24 June 2014

wow! what a sad-sounding person. : ( a character from your imagination i hope. the three words i look forward to are come and eat. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Colleen Courtney 24 June 2014

Love how honest this poem comes across, but how awful that one feels they need to remain with one who is so terribly cruel! Although to leave means being alone for awhile, it also means freeing you to be able to let one who will treat you kindly into your life.

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Emily Boschulte

Emily Boschulte

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