Saturday, March 8, 2008

{my Beautiful Sunrise} Comments

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As dawn greets the day
And sunlight sparkles
Rays pouring down
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Lillian Jamison
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James B. Earley 24 March 2008

Sunrise....the most beautiful aspect of the day.............! Excellent.

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James B. Earley 24 March 2008

Sunrise....the most beautiful aspect of the day.............! Excellent.

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Ernestine Northover 22 March 2008

There is something so refreshing about the sunrise, a new day dawning, new things to encounter, new people to meet, and new places to find. A lovely write that lifts the spirits. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 08 March 2008

Your poem Lillian radiates as the warmth of your beautiful sunrise! *10*! ! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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James B. Earley 08 March 2008

Ah that magic of the morning - the most astounding aspect of the day. Thanks.

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The Saturday Sunrise breaks, in the northeast, and with it comes a stunning offerage of warmth & romance....poetics seed & feast.....Excellent work here! ~FjR ~ .2008.

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Lynda Robson 08 March 2008

Indeed Lillian as Andy says a beautiful poem, there is something special about sunrise, the start of a new day nature at its loveliest, thank you. Lynda xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 March 2008

Lillian, This poem is so beautiful, you can picture the sunrise in your mind, all the Colours come alive, I wonder why lovers always yearn to see the sunrise, but then I love to picture it rise in my loves eyes... Andy 1

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