My Beautiful One Comments

As a series of statements these ten lines add up to a convincing expression of a love affair already moving ahead with considerable speed. And there's movement in the nature of the love implied in two lines I like FALLING FOR YOU HAS BECOME MY FATE / LET'S GO TO THIS NEW WORLD OF OURS. This is a threshold moment, and crossing it together will be mutually enriching. Wonders await both of you! .

Nice thoughts of love, and nice rhyme too.

Beautiful poem, heartfelt and emotional.10+

This is so good, loving as the other people had already said.

very nice love feelings...............short and sweet.................

very beautiful poetry