My Beautiful Flower Comments

Beauty with the muse of life! Nice work.

Hi, well written lovely romantic poem with lots of emotions. I enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing..

.a lovely romantic piece, full of love and emotions......... I invite you to read my poem- - t.never look like one', , , , , , , , , , , plzz comment your views

A lovely romanticism in the poem expressing the love & likingness for the sweet heart.... loved it. You may read my poem My morning bud of rose

Beatiful emblem the flower for your love sweet dreams for you both...regards

Romantic piece of poetry, beautiful!

Lovely theme Allen. Keep writing!

Great poem! Please go to my poems and rate and comment on mine! Thank you!

i love the last two lines so beautiful for whom she should know.

Well once picked, it's up to us to care for it, a lovely poem on the flower :)

Just like flowers love comes in many shape, sizes and colors. I am glad I picked you is a very good line. Enjoyed it.

This art illustrates your higher abilities. You struggled in the beginning of this piece but came up sharp at the end A great piece of artistry Go ahead and prove that love

how sweet the fragrance of the flower. the first bloom of spring. your last stanza, lovely.

A smooth beautiful poem..... :) ...thx for sharing.

:) i smell the sweet smelling love in this poem.... :) as usual, its very nice :)

This is beautiful- I love the ending- and reading it relaxed me. I loved it.

Simple but beautiful, and the sincere emotion can be felt.

A beautiful poem indeed. Enjoyed the write. Very nice.

it's like a song. inspired write

There is a lot of repetition here, which is not a bad thing, as it might suggest unfurling and the pealing back of petals but its a tad too repetitious for me; despite that, there is a lot of honesty in the poem and that is great. i love that. Again its free form, and that makes the rhyming structure hard to comment on, I am not sure that the line the aroma of your sweet splendor works... what do you think?