My Battle Comments

Good stuff, Mary! This poem seems to encapsulate the nature of your writing as well... with your head raised high! ! Brian

There is much strength in your tears Mary and much weakness in their taunts.Love Duncan

What a poignant twist in the last verse Mary. Defiance in all but that; then the mask comes off and shows how hurt you are. 'How was it for me? ' Heart-rending TJ

Hang in there Mary, be above it all. Love Ernestine XXX

I enjoyed the honesty of this poem. Never let them get you down, more importantly there is no shame in shedding tears. So easy to read, Thankyou for sharing. Kindest Regards Slim. x.

Well said, Mary. Very honest words to cleanse away the hurt. Hugs to you, CJ

Very sincere nice poem

Great stuff, Mary. Best H

You may cry, but your tears will be victorious!