My Barren Mind Comments
My poetry armory has been tampered with.
Poem is set to go off.
She has pulled the strings in my heart.
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A composition that is both compelling and creative!
A creatively composed poem. Thanks a lot for allowing us an insight into your poetic thoughts!
Beautiful write that is full of your passion that is lit by an eternal flame!
I like how you express yourself in this poem. The words are simple, but yet they are captivating. Very nicely done.
You have words flowing and paint the picture well. Great work. I like this stanza: Her beauty is captivating, Coming forth as natural springs, From the deep places of her being.
Barren mind being pollinated by a beautiful lady resulting in multiparous. Metaphorical read Sir......Wonderful tribute to the well mannered lady even if you are late!
thanks Queeny for your valued comment. The lady is alive and kicking!
Nice piece....If only she gets a chance to read this....she won't be unenchanted by this...that is one of the many potent magic of poetry....poetry is charming and this poem a very nice one.thanks for sharing
thanks Nel for appreciating my work...there is no doubt about the power of poetry
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7/25/2025 7:30:32 AM # 1.0.0
wonderfully composed piece and creative nice piece my friend keep writing