Sunday, November 30, 2014

My Bad Vision Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Walking along the serpentine path
Deep inside a village,
I find on the earthen walls-
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Amitava Sur
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 December 2014

Same both the version yet reading fills with truth

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Lorraine Colon 04 December 2014

Reading your poem gives us distinct feelings about 2 different localities. One is so pleasant and welcoming, while the other is cold and pushes the traveler away. And a sign with so few words can turn us around and send us running down a different path. Very well written.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 December 2014

I have already read its Hindi version and that is beautiful but please let me say the true beauty of Amitava appears in the English version. It's nice.............10

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Bernard Snyder 01 December 2014

A bad vision it was, Mr.Sur. I enjoyed this! Nice.

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