Thursday, October 22, 2015

My Baby's Hands Comments

Rating: 4.9

Oh how I love my baby's hands
Tiny, delicate, fragile
I am awestruck
I stare at them
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Elisabeth Wingle
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Castellenas John 20 March 2019

I love and I understand this poem. I raised four children and I have three grandchildren. A lovely poem for love and appreciation.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 August 2018

I am three at my birthday ' she says, proudly trying to stick three fingers in the air and hold two down at the same time My baby is three now.....she folds it angelically........ yes your baby is an angel...... God bless u always and your lovely Baby.. tony

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Really, the smile and the characters of baby makes our Sorrows away, nice mam.thank you.

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Wes Vogler 07 January 2016

I was born in 1930 my baby girl was born in 1960 her baby girl was born in 1990 (apparently Alyssa has a duty in 2020) talk about the order of things. Loved your verse (even tho free verse)

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Elisabeth Wingle 07 January 2016

Thanks Wes, I was born in 61, but I always wished I had been born in 60, because I always thought it would be so cool if my birth year as the same as age. So to make up for that bitter disappoint ment. I gave birth to two daughters in 1990, no... Not twins! Their birthdays are 1-1-90 and 12-28-90, and just for the heck of it, I had one more in 94. And that daughter is going to make me a grandma in July!

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Japhet Pamai 05 November 2015

Beautifully written!

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Pamela Sinicrope 03 November 2015

I ❤️ This poem too! This is so poignantly expressed and well written. There's not much better in this world than holding your babies' hands throughout life!

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Elisabeth Wingle 04 November 2015

Pamela, i am so glad that you like this poem. It is very special to me and I was apprehensive about putting it out there, for the world to judge. I can not wait to read your poems.

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Hazel Durham 01 November 2015

I love this stunning write such precious moments expressed with the beauty of your words!

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Elisabeth Wingle 01 November 2015

I hold this poem very close to my heart, as you said it contains my 'precious moments. Thank you for the kind review

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Kelly Kurt 25 October 2015

Keep writing and encourage your daughter to write too.22 years pass quickly but you will always have this poem to remember

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Elisabeth Wingle

Elisabeth Wingle

Cleveland, Ohio
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