Beautiful little girl
That's what you are
With that cute little curl
Im glad we came this far
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This is indeed a lovely little poem, but if you added your apostrophes and capital letters, it would turn your poem from good into excellent. Hope you don't mind my saying this (but I always notice these things) .
i love it! so who was this written to? KEEP DOING THE SWEET JOB! ! ! ~SuNsHiNe ♥
Beautiful poem, I absolutly love this. xox keep wrighting! <33 =) -Meghan Rhy
Aw, that poem was beautiful. Keep writing, you're an excellent poet.