Tuesday, July 6, 2010

My Autumn [2] Comments

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Around me trees are stripped
rigid, bare and totally naked
and heaps of leaves lie fallen
already colouring
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Gert Strydom
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UnKnown Messenger 06 July 2010

I like your poem, because it reminds me of how life emerges through pain and suffering. meaningless it may seem, but everything has exactly the meaning we give it. i like the way you say 'you are still in my heart as if you are a part of me', but we're still connected in one way or another and the part of the same cycle that has pervaded for eons through many lives.

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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