Monday, April 12, 2010
My Aunts Comments
Rating: ★5.0
My Aunt Myrtle had a turtle
With whom she liked to play.
But the problem with poor turtle
was that he was made of clay.
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Matt Mooney
01 May 2010
Amusing and nicely constructed.To be memorized and recited to your friends!
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner
20 April 2010
really very sweet aunts... :) like the way you penned it.
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7/25/2025 1:13:27 PM # 1.0.0
I see some metaphors in the 'turtle clay' and the 'trolley' (I believe that this is what you have in mind) , as it was 'pushed around the School'...Hmmmm. One may wonder how soft or hard is that clay, and how often did she pushed that 'trolley'. Very subtle meanings are hidden from these lines.. I like it when I am digging for something like this.... Good, really good one...