Tuesday, October 1, 2019

My Aunt's Regret Comments

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I have an aunt out in Cali,
we used to visit every year,
she had a yoga studio,
and my grandmother used to cheer
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Mahtab Bangalee 01 October 2019

excellent narrative story// well written,10+

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Spock The Vegan 01 October 2019

A well thought out poem, and well delivered.

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King Crow 01 October 2019

Really good rhyming story a little long but it was good

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David Welch 02 October 2019

Thanks. I do tend toward narrative and short epic forms, so I guess they do run longer than most poems. But thanks for sticking with it!

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