What I tried to pick up
The oldie pass-ports to 'Success'
With a burning desire to recollect;
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Audiences are those that appreciate that you write for yourself first and that it is original and also pleases them. good write. Very astute and economical language.
What kind of praising is worth u! Unquestionable poem! The style of this is fantastic and composing verses is marvelous, too.And when it is filled by essential rhymes, the only one I can say is perfect.
Finally, I decided to neglect all With heavy sigh how to avoid flaw; Again and again, being in vain Still supposed to be shamed! ! ! failures again and again should not be the cause for being shamed but confession of failure yields high moral value. a nice poem.I like it. keep writing.
Finding one's true self can take an instant or a lifetime. But when we forgive ourselves and move forward, eventually our true self will find us.
Older can only show you how to be yourself and Believe in yourself in matters such as this. An origional little write that just seems to work so well!