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Lovely, fascinating poem, Dear Poet! The opening line impresses me - I'd like to love you as you are - beautiful! I have to say - Your wife is a fortunate lady! Enjoy reading your poems!

I'd like You love me as I do With all my virtues and vices, too. Let us unite and take a vow To love and live in peace ALWAYS XXXXXfrom now.? ? ? ? ? Such love is rare today some poets betray read each one and to them say love your wife keep off your eyes from mine

What a lovely thing to give as gift! A gift that means well, and comes from heart but with enough art to make it endearing. Beautiful.

Superb poem. This is how love, true love is. Inspiring and touching.

I will pray to God that this love will get double, triple and multiple every year...An awesome one...

so happy to read this poem dear Devanushu! It's a blessing to love and be loved.. even after 28 years of married life, you hold her close to your heart...it's amazing! May your love for each other grow strong as each passing day! stay blessed! 10

loving your beloved wife as she is......... it is easily said.. but difficult to practice....... your good will born out of love will make you keep your promises to her........ lovely poem on love. tony

Wonderful work Devanshu! It's really one of the wonderful love songs I have ever read. Finely fabricated ideas with a nice fusion of emotions, words and rhythm rarely seen together. Thanks for sharing....10+++++

like to love you as you are, .. the very first verse made me thinnk........ how difficult it is for us to accept the other as he is or she is..........it is trly difficult. only a magnificent heart can do that. I'd like to sing a song of love, with all your virtues and vices.......... very fine, thought provoking love relationship.. thank u dear poet. tony

nice loving lines- Let us unite and take a vow To love and live in peace from now. I remember JOHN DONNE ..love so alike that none do slacken, none can die. great love and dedication on marriage anniversary nice 10++++

A beautiful poem of love. Very heartwarming. A priceless and timeless gift for your beloved wife. It captures a passionate avowal of love and devotion. Beautifully crafted and great rhyme. Liked reading it.10

Happy 28th Marriage Anniversary, may be too late, but I read this poem now. It's a nice dedication to a lovely wife.

The pious bond is there between husband and wife. By virtue love unites and shines. This poem is a nice tribute poem to your wife. Your 28th Marriage Anniversary is made memorable through this poem. We are wishing you very happy marriage anniversary....10

A good start with a nice poem, Devanshu. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Well conceived and elegantly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Devanshu.