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Lo! present is ephemeral future is the shadow of past

a few words well spoken we all seek for simple present nice writing

nice poem......10 It is mental status That always forces To loose trust And train behind with no trace Make present beautiful Try always to be successful This shall add fragrance Life may be revived at once We are to present ourselves And simply face The condition prevalent And never look absent

quite an interesting poem, but better to forge on ahead and just forget the past

excellent! So effective with concise and meaningful words. Thank you so much for your comment for me as a poet. Appreciate it very much.

Present is all that counts. Nicely said in a short and sweet verse. Thank you.

Lovely idea to believe in today but in the light of past and a determination for future. Keep writing I liked it.

Lovely idea to believe in today but in the light of past and a determination for future. Keep writing I liked it.

Perfect writing. I really enjoyed this Perfetto il mio amico

Beautiful use of metaphor and Hope for simple present. Good write.