My Apple Tree Comments

Pregnant with passion that runs like a river and flows like a fountain. Well done my friend!

this is a beautiful piece, easier to read, had a nice sound good work

Tunji..this is a nice and nice work! ! ! but i will like more if you make in sentence by sentence not continuously line..Anyway Tunji..This is awesome u know..keep it up_Soul

Tunji, this is a very beautiful poem. As usual, here you have displayed your great mastery of the English language. The poetic and romantic heart of the poet can be read through clear images. But again, I would really suggest that you give readers time to pause by putting your lines into verses which will give the readers like me a good time to digest all the wonderful images you capture in very good sentences and phrases. Take care.

Aww, I thought the poem was sweet and awesome. My interpretation of the poem is let me be your everything and no matter how dark life is or how many things disappear in your life you want that one person to be apart of you. Anyways, thanks for sharing to poem with me and for writing this poem. Keep up the good work. :)