Sunday, November 15, 2015

My Apology To You Is Like My Night Sky Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dear my farest star
When I, the sun will finally set
I hope my brightest ray be finally gone
Because there is no intention of me to hide you
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2017

My distant companion, If my sky blue is hurting you For you my apology is the night sky Be shine..Be shine there if you forgive.. .. great theme. Apology is a best quality that can vanish the agony and bitterness. Beautifully painted poem amazingly shared here..10

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Mj Lemon 14 June 2017

This does bring to mind....Arise fair Sun...The sincerity of any genuine apology can indeed destroy all lingering elements of bitterness, Robbed of its sting, that Envious Moon. This is a great piece, Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 14 June 2017

Shiniest thank for you dear, love is the secret recipe for a smile to awake from our bad days...lets forgiveness erase the scar, understanding bold the beauty of relationships...Your comment so beautiful, it shine so bright to me..loved it

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 March 2016

Muse in fine twists n turns n soaring skyline imagination. Good work. Shows kindness n compassion of yor soul.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 December 2015

Just if you can shine to touch my heart with true love. Nice work.

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Paul Brookes 29 November 2015

Much beauty here I enjoyed it very much

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Hans Vr 28 November 2015

Great write, Soul. Thought provoking. When our own light so bright, we tend to hide the light of others. God has created night to let the less bright ones shine too. I love the message inside this poem.

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Hazel Durham 24 November 2015

To give praise to another person and to be delighted to see them shine so bright is a gift of kindness and goodness that has it's own beautiful light that shines from the heart and soul. A really beautiful poem about truth and friendship that shines so bright in a sometimes dark world!

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Bharati Nayak 16 November 2015

Beautiful words, beautiful poem.Deep love and close friendship some times marred by jealousy, when one gets jealous of other's talent.In this case both are like shining stars in their own way.One will not overshadow the other.There is an earnest desire to make up.with apology and forgiveness and see the other one to shine brightest as there is deep love for the other..Thanks for sharing.I too like your words on poet page - - - - - - - - - -10

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 November 2015

Your words are magic and reading your notes I can see your heart. Thank you Unwritten Soul....10

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Farzad Jahanbani 15 November 2015

very nice Feeling is in your poem & this vers is beautiful: My tears are the rainbow at the sunset Good shiny time

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