Dear my farest star
When I, the sun will finally set
I hope my brightest ray be finally gone
Because there is no intention of me to hide you
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This does bring to mind....Arise fair Sun...The sincerity of any genuine apology can indeed destroy all lingering elements of bitterness, Robbed of its sting, that Envious Moon. This is a great piece, Soul.
Shiniest thank for you dear, love is the secret recipe for a smile to awake from our bad days...lets forgiveness erase the scar, understanding bold the beauty of relationships...Your comment so beautiful, it shine so bright to me..loved it
Muse in fine twists n turns n soaring skyline imagination. Good work. Shows kindness n compassion of yor soul.
Just if you can shine to touch my heart with true love. Nice work.
Great write, Soul. Thought provoking. When our own light so bright, we tend to hide the light of others. God has created night to let the less bright ones shine too. I love the message inside this poem.
To give praise to another person and to be delighted to see them shine so bright is a gift of kindness and goodness that has it's own beautiful light that shines from the heart and soul. A really beautiful poem about truth and friendship that shines so bright in a sometimes dark world!
Beautiful words, beautiful poem.Deep love and close friendship some times marred by jealousy, when one gets jealous of other's talent.In this case both are like shining stars in their own way.One will not overshadow the other.There is an earnest desire to make up.with apology and forgiveness and see the other one to shine brightest as there is deep love for the other..Thanks for sharing.I too like your words on poet page - - - - - - - - - -10
Your words are magic and reading your notes I can see your heart. Thank you Unwritten Soul....10
very nice Feeling is in your poem & this vers is beautiful: My tears are the rainbow at the sunset Good shiny time
My distant companion, If my sky blue is hurting you For you my apology is the night sky Be shine..Be shine there if you forgive.. .. great theme. Apology is a best quality that can vanish the agony and bitterness. Beautifully painted poem amazingly shared here..10