Whenever you fall down
or be frown
with your mates
and ignore their gates
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Full of hope, cheery and optimistic, reaching apex through deeds...a good poem with good message
apex is a nice word to describe one state great bio inspiring one
Surely, happiness shared will double; while sorrow will come down. Sorrow should not be shared with unfaithful persons because they may misuse it..This poem gives a positive energy, Good
I agree wholeheartedly! If one truly love, he will be willing to lay down his life for the person he loves. He looks to find the way to make his love a better person even some time it hurts. A sacrificial an unselfish love, true love. I wish you the best. your poem is much more touching, not full of negative feelings any more, and I am glad. Dwell on the good; dwell on the bad only if it brings out the good which is sympathy or compassion. Peace and keep up the good work.
yeah, a rigid determination and thus a lovely poem afterall