Sunday, June 23, 2013

My Apex Comments

Rating: 4.7

Whenever you fall down
or be frown
with your mates
and ignore their gates
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survi sharma
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Anamika Jalan 31 July 2013

yeah, a rigid determination and thus a lovely poem afterall

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 08 July 2013

Yes! yes! yes! I agree.

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Yasmin Khan 07 July 2013

Full of hope, cheery and optimistic, reaching apex through deeds...a good poem with good message

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Heather Wilkins 01 July 2013

a good write thanks for sjaring

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Jenie Franksay 26 June 2013

good verse. liked it v much

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Vishal Sharma 26 June 2013

apex is a nice word to describe one state great bio inspiring one

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Surely, happiness shared will double; while sorrow will come down. Sorrow should not be shared with unfaithful persons because they may misuse it..This poem gives a positive energy, Good

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Indira Babbellapati 23 June 2013

Yes man, I do agree! How dare, I don't?

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Don Nguyen 23 June 2013

I agree wholeheartedly! If one truly love, he will be willing to lay down his life for the person he loves. He looks to find the way to make his love a better person even some time it hurts. A sacrificial an unselfish love, true love. I wish you the best. your poem is much more touching, not full of negative feelings any more, and I am glad. Dwell on the good; dwell on the bad only if it brings out the good which is sympathy or compassion. Peace and keep up the good work.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 23 June 2013

Well written. Thanks for sharing

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