Sunday, July 26, 2020

My Anticlimax Comments

Rating: 4.5

With a curiosity I came,
What is life?
Who is God?
Where is He?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2020

A brilliant poem on love, life and death has been so impressively delineated by you dear respected Akhtar sir. The beginning of the poem begins with love, curiosity, question tag and God. In your inscription I found philosophy of life well introduced in the last stanza in between climax and anticlimax. Many many thanks for sharing this gem. Full vote....five stars.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 September 2020

" Life is love. God is love. Love flourishes in the soil of beauty and springs as flowers with colors and odors." ......Fabulous! A deeply touching poem, Akhtar Sahab. In life, many questions remain unanswered...10

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M Asim Nehal 02 August 2020

A fruitful journey of life aptly described in this anticlimax poem. We do find answers to some questions and some remains unanswered. Nicely worded poem 10

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Bharati Nayak 31 July 2020

I see my anticlimax now. I came with questions, I go with answers. In the return journey, I am empty handed, my eyes are closed, and there are tears in it, below the partly closed eye lids. What a scene, smile on lips and tears in the eyes, I am saying good bye to my beautiful loved ones! - -Wow - What a beautiful poem on life's philosophy!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 July 2020

helllllooooooo sirrrr , ., ., ., ..no point posting poems no comments get recorded ph is not bothered it seems techy foul could be so read older poetry

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 July 2020

All creation is an evidence of God's love to humanity. Yes, God is love and life is love. A beautiful and touching poem that conveys a message of faith, life and death and love of family. So beautifully crafted by a great Poet and a great man.

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Anticlimax, the truth of life very nicelly penned in the poem.Like the poem.

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