My Anonymous Valentine Comments

Confused...! ? ? Just break in...! ! : -)

You anonymous, don't stay behind! I open the window for you To have fresh air and the blue sky

Thanks Sawanji.But I didn't write 'gave'.It was give always there.I used pin to have rhyme with herein.Anyways, after writing a poem we should not leave P.H without noticing our typo or any kind of mistake.Thanks again for your superb comment.

Although I enjoyed reading your poem, I would like to point out some errors/suggestions: - *I close the window *gave me wound *a thousand pin/ thousands of pin Good write by the way!