My Ankle Bracelet Comments

simply beautiful: ].

easy to read, intriguing wording

sensitive portrayal. nicely narrated. good to read.

Wow, Emu, what a great feeling you brought to me, with this masterpiece, I thought I was all alone when it came to love, please read some of my poems and see we are singing the same song, you got my vote, god bless you and keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo

Hi Emu - This is a very interesting poem because in Etheopia an ankle bracelet has ethnic significance in respect of the status of a Girl. In India it is OK to wear it on the left ankle but on the right ankle it could a message of 'availability'. An angle braclet is not only beautiful visually and enhances the beauty of the ladies feet it also tinkles due to the bells and anounces her presence. In your poem its removal seems to indicate 'I am ready to be betrothed'. In love we all reach the point where we 'Take our last breath and plunge into OUR world'. This is a beautiful experience if our love is muttual. The final line of the poem gives all hope if we have not already taken this plunge. 'Knowing that I can sail without hesitation and anchor with certainty'. A beautiful poem Emu that only you could have written. Love in poetry - JOHN.

However, I had stopped and wrapped my fear with his fragrance and walked over and wore my sandals I then looked around and saw nothing in my space confusing and amazing at the same time....

A NICE POEM. I AM REALLY AMAZED AFTER READING IT. I GIVE YOU 10/10 .

When following our heart bravery is required as it is risky, but has ability to be fufilling finding a soulmate. Beautiful poem

well e4xpressed and touching poem. voted10 surya

Very expressive, very honorably spoken poem of love. Good Write, Your friend Lynn

What wonderful ending full of determination.

so, I took my last alone breath and took a plunge into our world knowing that I can sail without hesitation and anchor with certainty…yes dear with well determined efforts you cansail through any rough weather...lovely expressions...10 readmien...miss i miss u...anywhere.... smiley

Great expression...spilled along diamond laced lines..make this poem sparkle...wonderful emotion used to deliver your words...well done Emu..