angels had to drop
of water one drop
it left the sky high up
and fell gently in my half empty cup
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Now this is a really very clever and very effective. Great work
First i imagined a angel dropping then tears falling then someone crying. I like poems like that, so it was a great read, thanks for sharing.
a simple poem...yet so beautiful! ! ! ....if you have noticed or i dont know if you have written it like that....but all the lines end in the letter 'P'
i love how you ended your sentences in p's its very catchy....nice (^_^)
a world of sweet poise an angel from the sky fall to place and let her rise what a thing for my heart to read please write more
wonderful job! ! keep up the good work. =) i enjoy your poems.
very very very nice work my bro keep moving upwards
I had enjoy readind this!