Wednesday, July 30, 2008

My Angelic Drop Comments

Rating: 4.8

angels had to drop
of water one drop
it left the sky high up
and fell gently in my half empty cup
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Tareq Jalabi
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

I had enjoy readind this!

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Leslie Ching 27 December 2008

very interesting and picturesque...well done... lc

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Now this is a really very clever and very effective. Great work

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First i imagined a angel dropping then tears falling then someone crying. I like poems like that, so it was a great read, thanks for sharing.

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Anjali Chandra 20 November 2008

a very simple nice poem.i reaally like it

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Nia Riz 16 November 2008

a simple poem...yet so beautiful! ! ! ....if you have noticed or i dont know if you have written it like that....but all the lines end in the letter 'P'

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Min Sia 16 November 2008

Simple yet rivers of emotions flowing through! Really touching!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 17 August 2008

...a 10 has been clicked for this fine poem.

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Stacey Watts 13 August 2008

Really beautiful poem.

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Sage of Time 11 August 2008

i love how you ended your sentences in p's its very catchy....nice (^_^)

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Arabian Heart 08 August 2008

a world of sweet poise an angel from the sky fall to place and let her rise what a thing for my heart to read please write more

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&&angel4ever && 08 August 2008

nice piece keep holding ur pen

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Serenity Prayer 08 August 2008

wonderful job! ! keep up the good work. =) i enjoy your poems.

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very very very nice work my bro keep moving upwards

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Rachel Reed 30 July 2008

wow. you are a great writer

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(: God's Wild Child :) 30 July 2008

wow i like it. very good job. =D

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Francesca Lam 30 July 2008

you made that 'drop' so special. :) nice writing! Fran xo

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