Friday, May 29, 2009

My Angel The Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once I saw an angel with a broken wing,
a piece of heaven was left alone,
this angel had no force to go back.
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Ana Z. M.
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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

wow..this one is so great...and i enjoyed it very much..cause i felt like a demon too once/...but after i felt i m an angel it is all over though...this is an interesting piece..and in a deeper sense this poem analyzes the teen psychology very vividly nice...10++ regards shan

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Noel Horlanda 30 May 2009

It's a lovely poem that tells a love story between and angel and a mortal. Yeah I remember the movie Angels and Demons. But the story was something different from your love poem. Your lines so smooth, it flows clearly like spring waters, easy to digest and of course so sweet to drink. Thanks...10+

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Kesav Easwaran 29 May 2009

good narration...love can play any magic, Ana...can change a demon to an angel as you rightly said...good write...pleasing to read...10

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