My butterfly’s a moth
My sparkle turned to gray
My sunshine is a heavy rain
My angel flew away
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Very creative, I like this a lot, I like the look of it as well with (MY) at the beginning of each sentence. I wonder if that is a certain form of poetry, I like it very much.----Melvina
Another great poem, with unique form. I often enjoy experimenting with different forms of poetry, but my attempts are not half as good as yours. :)