Saturday, October 31, 2009

My Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

The glitter on his wings,
The sparkle in his eyes,
The pain in his face,
Why I have to think why,
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Amy Jayne
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Matthew Densley 01 November 2009

Very well writen. I like it. :)

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Amy Jayne 01 November 2009

Thanks guys! My inspiration for this poem was my step-mum. Her hormonalls are very tight and she always crys. I just wanted to let her know that she is wanted on my family both sides! : -) thanks for the comments! : -)

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John Grover 31 October 2009

who was your inspiration for this

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Dr.subhendu Kar 31 October 2009

The glitter on his wings, The sparkle in his eyes, The pain in his face, Why I have to think why, .....................yet love redounds to mirth, wonderful exposition of art to paint by colors, evocative and ingenious too,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Bradley Stoke, Bristol
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