Saturday, October 25, 2008

My Ambitious Is Dead Comments

Rating: 5.0

Exhaling life
Inhaling death
Dream of lies
Love is fake
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Asif Baloch
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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

Well don Asif. Deeply woven sentiment/feeling; well expressed......10

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Egi David Perdana 26 October 2008

a wonderful line and prasa, good idea 10

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Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2008

good expressive write...excellent clarity on the selected theme...10

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Asif Baloch

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