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'.....filled out the hollows of my face'. My favourite line. I adore this poem. Lucky is the man you wrote this poem for.

young as i am i have no power to comment on the matters of love, but i think this is how you let the feeling take over when you are in love with someone. your writting is beautiful, i will say that again and again. thank you for sharing.

this is a lovely tribute to your loved one.