Saturday, October 4, 2008

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Rating: 2.7

Your shinin like a star,
So bright that when we're apart,
It still seems like,
The distances is barely there..
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Dislocated Heart
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Mayra Cerda 09 February 2010

i like the way you open up your heart like that on a poem nice :)

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Meagan Slack 06 May 2009

Wow its so refreshing to hear a guy speak like that.. i really love how you are very open and vulnerable.. keep writing

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Kerli Undead 10 February 2009

wow... your peoms have such wonderfull feelings that give off, i love them ~kerli

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Stacey Watts 29 November 2008

Really a heart felt piece. Great job.

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 27 November 2008

On a scale of 1-10.....15

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