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I'd give you everything I have
My heart, my soul, my mind
To always have you in my life
And walk with you through time
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Bold expression of a genuine, plain, simple, candid and humble love! Nice rhythm and diction. Could have been far better with some paraphrases. Yet I like it.
An expression of inner feeling. Hope there's equal response. Nice job!
Words like birds taking bath on brook, , nice singing and flowing..thank you
Yea, she caught Shame and shamed him with her kiss, With her fair kiss, and lips much lovelier Than lips of amorous roses in late spring.
Can't believe this has no comment or vote, it has now! Lovely read, Lorraine
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7/29/2025 6:03:31 AM # 1.0.0
Very bold way to let her know what you'd like! Nice poem!