As a teenager
my favorite thing
was floating.
I could float for hours.
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The strong connection to the beautiful moments that need not to pass so quickly, Brilliantly done by such a fine writer, Love duncan
'Tossed on a bikini....'? Wish I could have been there. Not bad at all the poem I mean. Best H
Those were the days Mary, lovelier when we look back. Very nice write, I can picture it all. Love Ernestine XXX
Very romantic Mary. Your poetry is getting better all the time. Rusty
Very cool...I like this poem a lot. Very romantic very tranquil and relaxing...good job.
Awwwwwww...such a sweet piece, I really enjoyed the visual and the details. A good read, thanks for sharing.
A wonderful poem, Mary and a beautiful ending! Brian