Saturday, January 21, 2006

My Air Mattress Naps Comments

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As a teenager
my favorite thing
was floating.
I could float for hours.
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Mary Nagy
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Brian Dorn 01 February 2007

A wonderful poem, Mary and a beautiful ending! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 11 April 2006

The strong connection to the beautiful moments that need not to pass so quickly, Brilliantly done by such a fine writer, Love duncan

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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 January 2006

'Tossed on a bikini....'? Wish I could have been there. Not bad at all the poem I mean. Best H

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Ernestine Northover 22 January 2006

Those were the days Mary, lovelier when we look back. Very nice write, I can picture it all. Love Ernestine XXX

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Uriah Hamilton 22 January 2006

A lovely scene of youth, romance and innocence.

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Rusty Daily 21 January 2006

Very romantic Mary. Your poetry is getting better all the time. Rusty

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Theorem Thetruthserum 21 January 2006

Very cool...I like this poem a lot. Very romantic very tranquil and relaxing...good job.

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Cat Lam 21 January 2006

Awwwwwww...such a sweet piece, I really enjoyed the visual and the details. A good read, thanks for sharing.

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